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2024-11-17 14:05
Tags: #Chasing Arc #Angst
6/10
Art
Writing
Plot
The art is super good although there’s some weird inconsistencies in the background. The beginning got me hooked but I felt like there wasn’t enough angst and slow burn before the chasing arc. The chasing arc felt too sudden and the time they were together didn’t feel like it was enough for the ML to fall for MC to do a complete 180 in his personality.
ML felt like his personality switched rather than character development. They touched on his clean freak issue but I felt like they could’ve expanded on why he was like that and his trauma to make it more satisfying that he was willing to be dirty and go look for MC. I love me some toxic relationship into redemption arc but the lack of character’s back story and unfulfilling plot was not it.
[end] ch. 51
There was some really questionable and sad bits, but the end was absolutely adorable.
Okay read. Was expecting a little more even if the plot isn't that original. I don't really like the artstyle and the characters are not remarkable. I liked the omega the most, he's very self aware and his obsession with going to the mountains or whatever is really funny. I am glad we got to see their kid and even if she looked like a wet knee when she was born, she turned out very cute when she grew up
It’s strange, but quite funny. I like their relationship. And the art gets really better at the end.
2024-11-05 22:32
Tags: #Yaoi #Omegaverse #smut #rich seme #Full Color BL #tough bottom
Ch51
2024-11-05 18:20
Tags: #Alpha x Omega #drama
Rape, pregnant, obsessed seme
great plot bad writing not totally insufferable though just have to get through the first like 25 chapters also art isnt that great but they kept the smut to a minimum which i liked their kid is freaking ugly not cute at all
2024-11-03 12:45
Tags: #Omegaverse
The ending is cute ig. But the. Story itself is so goddamn toxic. “Oh yeah i was super abusive before but now i love you so forgive me”. No. Also i think author has never seen neither a baby nor a person who gave birth not long ago before.
2024-10-27 23:35
Tags: #Omegaverse #MPreg #rich seme #tough bottom #smut
The ML in the first half was such an asshole that I was almost annoyed into dropping this. But because of that, I was looking forward to his development. Too bad he just got replaced with clone that has a much nicer personality halfway through the story. Extra star for actually drawing the MC with a baby bump and lactating.
2024-10-12 15:54
Tags: #Omegaverse #BL #rich seme #smut
Not bad
Okay read. Was expecting a little more even if the plot isn't that original. I don't really like the artstyle and the characters are not remarkable. I liked the omega the most, he's very self aware and his obsession with going to the mountains or whatever is really funny. I am glad we got to see their kid and even if she looked like a wet knee when she was born, she turned out very cute when she grew up
2024-09-23 04:10
Tags: #yaoi
One of the best omegaverse
Dropped after ch. 38
Idk how to explain it but this was an omegaverse but not? Pheromones were mentioned less than how many hours of sleep I get every night (and that says a lot considering my username), that’s crazy. I feel like pheromones play such an important role in omegaverse too.
Also don’t even get me started on the seme… he was a total piece of shit, I was holding out for such a good personality arch and instead got whiplash so hard I think my dreams would make more sense. The “how it chews to gum five feels- gum gum” meme makes more sense than that arch, hello???
Bad art (you can definitely see the progress in the artists art though and honestly I can’t draw people to save my life so props to them), the worst character development I think I have ever read, and a plot that is hanging on a thread for its dear life. After reading this I think I can confidently attempt reading werewolf stories off Wattpad or AO3 and not cringe.
Remove the “Waiting for more chapters” tag please, I’m waiting for my sanity to come back after this one…
Toxic in the beginning 20-30 chapters but ig alpha redeem himself